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No... not a plan by Tanki's Forumers to get me to Legend... no... noooo.... NOOOOO ???
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Approved. So well written. The plot is easily carried along around the dialogue, informing readers about the current situation in the story as well as providing some hilarious comic relief - something I really enjoy about your stories. Everything around the plot quietly adds more detail while subtly moving along to a strong ending. Lots of quality content here in this chapter - great work! Edits: minor grammar fixes
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Approved. Woah, that was a lot to digest. It's a shorter and more dialogue-heavy chapter, but the style fits really well, opening up parts the plot with description mixed in there. Overall, your writing is amazing; I'm especially impressed with the way that the plot is developing. If I remember correctly, this looks to me like a dark twist has just come. This feels only like a small spoiler to the start of some huge action - I can't wait! Edits: minor spacing fixes, added Oxford commas.
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Aw, darn it. Tanki added rewards I want, so now I actually have to play.
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Hi, As mentioned earlier, the results have already been compiled. However, we had a bit of an issue with the logistics; hopefully, it should be fixed and will be out soon. Don't worry, they were not cancelled. Thanks for your patience!
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contest Bracket Masters - CCXIII Playoffs
Person_Random replied to Person_Random in Newspaper Archive
Forgot to note this here, but if you're a helper or a candidate but are interested in trying it out for fun, feel free to do so! You won't win anything, but you'll be adding to the jackpot and making players happy ?, so if you want, give it a shot! -
(*cries in serious money being lost over a spoonful of premier vanilla ice cream*) We learned about dreams in class, and I mentioned that once, I had a dream that repeated a real life experience. Have you ever had one of those dreams?
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Approved. Great guide - you have brilliantly executed the art of giving quick advice and tons of information without flooding us with text. I really enjoy you adding in that bit of song lyrics at the end; it provides a creative touch that lets us know that it's you writing the guide. I made a few changes with the guide, mainly removing the Wiki descriptions as they aren't quite needed when you describe it as well. It might be better to add the stats, like the changes to the parameters instead. But other than that, it's a well-written guide; with some more practice and execution, you'll be working your way to the Newspaper-quality content! Edits: removed wiki descriptions, fixed many grammar errors.
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review After the Stream: Livestream 2020 Recap
Person_Random replied to Person_Random in Newspaper Archive
Let's kick off today's issue with a review of the livestream with our CM Marcus; Person_Random breaks down everything in the 2-hour stream in this summary article. If you missed out on the stream or want a recap, check it out! -
contest Bracket Masters - CCXIII Playoffs
Person_Random replied to Person_Random in Newspaper Archive
Need some crystals before Black Friday? Well, we have a quick and easy contest for you. All you need to do is predict the winner of the Clan Championship XIII tournament, so don't delay - participate now! -
results [Results] Describe This in 100 Words!
Person_Random replied to Person_Random in Newspaper Archive
Sorry for the bit of a delay, but let's hand out some prizes to some of the best writers in the Tanki community. Check out some of the top winning entries for this rendition of "Describe This in 100 Words!" right above, and don't forget to congratulate the winners! -
results [Results] Describe This in 100 Words!
Person_Random replied to Person_Random in [Results] Describe This in 100 Words! Newspaper Archive
You might be wondering where the results to our recent contests have been. *cough* Reporter-bot incompetence issues *cough*. Oh, what was I saying? Yeah, the results are here now. Enjoy! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We had a tad fewer entries than last time, but nonetheless, we still have a batch of great short works. Here are the winners: First Place goes to @C_O_Y_C2 for some awesome poetic verse explaining classic-style-hiphop's intentions for his daring move, earning 40 000 crystals and 15 containers. Reminds me of a few song parodies... hmm, good idea. Entry: Second Place goes to @Volturo, describing kaisdf and Pythor's epic flipping adventure with a splash of humor - winning a grand total of 30 000 crystals and 10 containers. Entry: And in Third Place, we have @Cyborg_Is_Noob, who reports to us the grand news of kaisdf and Pythor's unfortunate flip live from Skyscrapers, winning a prize of 25 000 crystals and 5 containers. Entry: A consolation prize of 20 000 crystals goes to @Leopard_2A7. Quick reminder to anyone who wants to win next time: try for a bit of a longer entry and use some humor and description to go beyond just what the picture says. You'll be on your way to the podium in no time! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for participating, and don't forget to congratulate the winners! -
Yeap. Secret bot reporter abilities - the ability to see through posts is amazing. Thanks for letting me know; if it's done, I'll get to it if I have time before eating and after notes and some other AWS pieces ?
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Congrats to @Hugoslav and @Signal on becoming Event Helper Candidates. Good luck with your candidacies!
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Will take a tad longer, but you got it ? Perfect way to stay awake after two near sleepless nights...
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Approved. Wow, excellent story - I struggle to crank out any stories (short stories mostly), let alone any of this caliber. I especially enjoyed the snapshot format of the plot; it helps distinguish the path of the relationship between father and daughter. Now, about your questions. First up, the title. I couldn't think of anything better to name it myself, but the story does need to wrap around the 'house' theme more, if you will (e.g. mentioning the house in the context of "their house" and then "her father's house" would be a perfect way to demonstrate this, though the execution will be tough). And don't worry about the appropriateness of the piece because I feel that there aren't any highly censorable parts (extreme and detailed violence, any suggestive themes), so everyone should be able to enjoy the story. I hope this addresses your concerns; keep up the great work! Edits: minor grammar fixes.
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Approved. Had a few troubles with the forum earlier, but thankfully, now it's fixed and everything's running smoothly. Unfortunately, I can't say the same for the plot of the story - it looks like we're having a few problems between the knights! The splash of comic relief from Sir Rodney is simply hilarious and adds depth and character development to the story. There's also a lot more description coming into the story; oh, I just can't wait for the best of the action to come! Edits: minor grammar fixes.
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Up and awake out of fear at 1am whilst reading in the AWS to prevent any sort of short circuit... Man, is this relatable!
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Yay, more congratulations ? Congrats to @T-B on becoming an Event Helper. Great work! Congrats to @tubaman_the_crazy on becoming an Assistant Candidate. I wonder if you play the tuba ? And finally, congrats to @Vegas on becoming RaS Candidate. Good luck with your candidacy!
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Congrats to @Hexedon becoming a Head Administrator. Well deserved! And also another big congrats to @rommeltanki on becoming Chat Administrator. Wow, so many admins ?
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Hi, You can edit your post and we'll approve it at a later date (when you are finished, just comment that you are done) or ask in PM for it to be removed, whichever is more convenient for you. Thanks for letting us know; if you have any AWS questions in future, feel free to ask me anytime!
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Approved. And yet another great story - it's too bad I hadn't approved this earlier, because it would have gone very well with the Halloween spirit. Anyhow, it's a very descriptive piece; the plot is just gushing with description and imagery, which is executed perfectly. The plot is pretty gripping, but of course, the little cliffhanger ending does make me want to know if you have more in store. Do keep me posted if you have more to share! Edits: minor grammar changes/tense changes.
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Approved. First off, welcome back; it's been a short while since I've seen this story series pop up in the approval queue. We're two for two - I just approved War for the Kingdom, Chapter 7, and I can say that this one is just as good. The execution and wording is just perfect, and the plot is developing so well (I feel a dark twist coming, but that's just me). I just can't wait for more! Edits: Removed a few commas.
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Approved. Wow. That was some amazing plot development: a wave of action culminating into an emotional turning point for the story. It has to be one of the best installments of the series, and as mentioned earlier, it will definitely change the direction of the story. I can't wait to see what comes next! Edits: removed a few commas.
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