Article Approved. Unlike Lolkiller with your last piece, I had somewhat less difficulty finding inaccuracies :P Having said that, the story is superb, saying just enough for the imagination to run amok with theories and questions. Love it. Preferred your story in General 1 though. Edits:

Article approved. Nice piece, great continuation of the last piece. Looking forward to Chapter 3! Note, if you want to have a separating line, you can use [.hr], or underscores and it would probably be better than hyphens. Very accurate overall. Edits:

As in, I just played an RGB MM game, and my team managed an impressive 187 deaths in 9 minutes before they capped 7 times. N.B. The game was with randoms (I wasn't in a group, and none of them were in my friends list), and they were all genuinely trying. They were just terrible.

Is there a record opportunity for most team deaths in a MM battle?

I've seen it happen.

Article Approved. Fantastic story! It really sets the scene for any upcoming instalments, and has a great cliff hanger to finish. Love the throwback to the old Madness by the way :P Very accurate piece overall. Edits:

Any news on rewards for long-lasting players?

A series of reporters (and/or admins) seem to be unavailable due to holiday/technical issues, hence I would presume the newspaper is being postponed to tomorrow, maybe slightly later. We are very sorry for the delay and any issues this might have caused N.B. Not an official statement, just my guess.

I should add here (to be fair) that I did basically all of the formatting. The headers and line breaks were my editing, as it was literally just a solid text wall before.

I struggle to believe I complained about being put against Field Marshals on my alt in MM battles, and anyway, I would still manage to survive and thrive against Field Marshals. MM hasn't been out long enough for me to have said that "a few months ago". And I do have enough crystals to get and M3 combo if I wanted one. You seem to have completely missed my point, I was saying that it is perfectly possible to manage in the current meta without buying. Anyway, this is a topic for asking Nives questions, not petty squabbles about whether the game is P2W or not. Any more comments, take to PM plx ^_^

My alt @IAmTheOneAndOnly hasn't bought, has an M2 combo, 2k of each supply and around 500k crystals. I agree with you, thanks to weekly mission rewards, The War, containers, etc, it really isn't that hard to survive without buying. And before you comment on the nub equipment, I am planning to buy two M2 kits as soon as I next rank up and they unlock. -_-

:ph34r: Plz no spam here, this is for discussion of the piece.

Article Approved. A significant improvement on the previous two articles you submitted. A bit all over the place, but certainly more logical and coherent. Try and vary the verbs you use with interesting synonyms. You use “Ran” 12 times - try sprinted, darted, dashed, scurried, hurried, rushed, etc. “Went” (4 times) and “found” (11 times) are other examples of overused verbs. Edits: Hey, I think I like being the bad guy ^_^

Article Approved. An extremely in-depth review of the kit, possibly too much so. To be honest with you, I would have finished the review after the segment of gold hunting. Having said this, the guide to countering opponents with Twins is all good, helpful information - but probably better to use it in a Twins guide than a kit review. I would very strongly recommend adding some images. Screenshots of battles with the kit, of the kit itself, etc. can make it far easier to read - breaking up paragraphs, etc. As well as this, it can make it far easier to explain certain concepts. Your description of Sandbox gameplay was understandable until you started talking about hiding in tunnels, of which Sandbox had none, last time I checked…. A small side note, you mention that the Panther module would make a solid choice for Island. Remember that there are 3 module slots, what else would you recommend? Edits:

Plagiarism doesn't require word for word copying, hence you can plagiarise film plots without necessarily copy pasta'ing the actual script.

Considering that the vlog team didn't invent them - these have been circling around the deep havens of chats for a while now, why were the vlog team not done for plagiarism? Nonetheless, I will keep this in mind and be wary of any similar plagiarism in future.

Love you too <3 Please try and provide actual feedback, preferably with evidence to back up your opinions. Thanks!

Article approved. A really nice piece, with some handy tips and tricks to help even the most experienced players! Also, very accurate - the most accurate piece I’ve approved so far :) Edits:

Rain lashes against the plastic sides of the bus shelter. It is late, and the brittle blackness of the night attests to this. Occasionally, a chink in the clouds allows the moon to illuminate a small patch of nearby ground. I huddle into a corner, back pressed against two of the plastic walls, cornered by the vicious walls of water plummeting from the sky, my coat proving itself ineffective as a suit of armour against the rain. On the plastic next to me is some faded graffiti; some swearwords have been crudely etched into the plastic. To my right, as if to taunt me, someone has carved an umbrella into the side, the cheerful depiction adding to my annoyance at the world. At one end of the stop is a list of buses and the times to their arrival. The 374, my bus, is supposedly “Due”, and has been for the last 5 minutes. Clearly the board is wrong, but I still get a wave of hope whenever I look up, only for it to be quashed a second later when I remember. Along the road there are a series of street lights, most shining bright, acting as beacons in the darkness. Some either don’t work, or flicker, almost acting as a form of pathetic fallacy, reflecting my exasperation. The sodden tarmac road is laced with puddles, each growing incrementally into miniature lakes, boosted by the rainfall. Each drop strikes the surface of the water like a meteorite, ploughing through any surface tension with ease, causing a miniature crown of water to fly up around the point of impact. A passing car streaks by, straight through the puddles, leaving tidal waves in its wake. I am drenched. Opposite me is the entrance to a park, the cast iron gates watched over by a pair of giant chestnut trees, wooden sentinels guarding the gates like wardens of a portal to another realm. Ever vigilant, they stand by in silence to watch commuters come and go from this bus stop, pursuing their futile daily goals like worker bees in a hive. They listen without ears, shedding secrets to one another in the rustling leaves. The gates are closed now, the metal spikes cast into the tops of the bars providing an ominous message who anyone who dare enter out of hours. Out of the darkness rears an oversize red monolith: the bus. Relieved to finally get out of the rain and the wind, I eagerly bound through the doors as soon as they open, collapsing into a seat for the ride home. - I hope you enjoyed my first article in the Newspaper, and feel free to leave comments below.

I know, I read that, and still constantly got confused when reading the table for some calculations I was doing. Fair enough. Apologies, I meant the new XT turrets and hulls: smoky and titan

A few smol things: For railgun, "reload time" and "charge time" are pretty confusing. Wouldn't it be better for reload time to be the time between firing and being ready to fire again, and then charge time to be time between shots or the 1.1 second "charging" time. http://prntscr.com/komwkt - " A ready-to-fire" For the interesting facts section, maybe update it with the XT skins update, and add that Rail M3 XT had a white beam. https://en.tankiwiki.com/Turrets - Add XT turrets (and maybe hulls to their respective page if this hasn't already been done)

I was scarred by 3rdOnion's link and it's an accurate piece because, well, it is.

Beyond deeply scarring me mentally, I'm afraid I don't see what this has to do with anything? If you are inferring plagiarism, I'm afraid I don't see it - could you please be more specific :wacko: