Article approved. An interesting poem that succinctly sums up one's life. The first 3 stanzas are great in terms of flow and rhyme, but after that it starts to become somewhat uneven, with vague half rhymes and hugely varying line lengths. I would recommend trying a bit more to stick to a rhyme/syllable scheme, as it flows better and makes it easier to read. Edits: A few words added, removed, or slightly changed to help flow. Your grammar is almost perfect, I added just one full stop near the beginning, otherwise it was perfect.

Quite a while ago I remember Nives saying that he thought it op, but that the Devs thought it balanced.

I presume Smoky and Titan XTs will be added to previews at some point?

Nives cooking stream!!] Edit: Probably still the same, considering crazy weekends give you 3 containers for 400 kills, which is easier than 100 stars.

In game probably the lack of the F5 refresh button on client. Out of it: the knowledge that all over the world, people are suffering and that for know, there is little available to do about it, so all one can do is just try and go one's best to keep the would a nice place. Any news on paints/skins for historic players?

Vulcan might be usable now D:

Yes, and I probably will be for a month or two still.

Article Approved. A bemusing piece, somewhat illogical, but nonetheless a good read. Also, I must say it was a highly accurate piece. Edits: Four very minor spelling changes 1 comma added

Graduates

Cool.

A very informative, helpful piece :) I like how you reviewed the only 3 wasp M1 kits and then complained about there being too many wasp M1 kits... A small note, you should try and be more definite in your comments. Someone who is new to the game is going to get more out of: Than:

T - Z

M - S

No no no no. It's a new paint release, obviously.

Naaah look at dem tunnels.... Gotta be a Silence rework.

MOP paints, esports paints, helper paints, etc...

The F5 refresh button on client M0 and M3 alterations Improvements to the in-game clan system Yeah, is all cool.

F - L

A - E

I think one of the main issues is the rating system. We were given this extremely advanced system that would be able to tell us/the game how good we are, so it can then pit equal rated people against each other. Unfortunately, the calculation is clearly terrible. I would say that this is because the biggest factor is rank. Simply ranking up increases your 'efficiency' by a few thousand. In theory then, a team of M0 WO3s would beat a team of drugging M2 WO1s. As if. Also, if you look at their ratings, my main account is roughly 1.5 times more 'efficient' than my alt purely based on ranks, which is ridiculous. I have a vague hunch that it also doesn't take into account someone's propensity to drug, which would explain a lot. I was recently put in a battle where their worst person's KD was more than the total kills of the 3 worst on my team. The game was actually quite close (3-2 to them), because I captured 2 flags whilst managing to do all the defending as well.

Article approved. Pretty good, certainly better than my entry for that competition was :x The ending feels very rushed. You suddenly bring in a huge amount of detail without really explaining it properly, and it all ends up kinda jumbled. · Overuse of commas: “I screw back the grill, and lie down on my bed.” does not need the comma · CaPiTaLiSe uR pRoPeR nOuNs/NaMeS · As I said in PM, three dots (“…”) signifies a pause, four (“….”) is a pause followed by a full stop. Five dots is just wrong :P · Get is such a dull verb. Why say “gets out” when you can say “leaves” Full list of edits will be sent via PM, as requested.

Article Approved. As a standalone piece, it has some flaws. The story seems to jump around at the start; the first paragraph describes the post-apocalypse scene, but ends with “the day of reckoning had arrived”, which suggests the apocalypse hadn’t yet started? As the introductory piece to a series, it is great. It sets the scene well enough for the story so far but leaves enough gaps for you to be able to go back and describe and fill in later. There are gaps. What happens in the flash of light? Does Émile have superpowers? What happens to him after this? Does he find his purpose? It is up to you to either pick up the pen and fill these in for a great story, or leave it as is with these unexplained plot holes. On a small side note, I really liked the ‘bloody hands’ section. The symbolism of the blood as sin clinging to him, and the slow realisation that the blood is actually his is really good description. Note to the author (specifically): the structure was actually pretty good, apart from the slightly confusing first and second paragraphs. Edits:

Because British English and American English are, as far as it matters, the same.

There are small variations between American English and British English. These are mostly to do with spellings, color and colour, gray/grey, etc. Also affected are a lot of words with word sections like "-ise", where the s is replaced with a z in American English. Examples of this: organise/organize, recognise/recognize, etc. Personally, I would say that it should all use British English, but then again I'm kinda biased. It should perhaps be consistent, but honestly, who cares. The effort of checking every page on the wiki for American English is not worth it. And anyway, it's not confusing, just triggering for a British grammar nazi like myself :p

The ratings system also appears to be down.