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    [Issue 76]

    :unsure: I don't think so at all tbh. I'm not a huge fan of kit reviews same as you, but I don't think anyone should play down the time and effort needed to write them. I've tried my hand at some, and they aren't something a lazy person would do lol. Anyways, our goal is to have a wide variety of pieces each issue to satisfy everyone. That's why we have the absolutely useless more humorous pieces by Rabin and myself, along with the practical articles by Hexed and LOLKILLER. :)
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    The Blue Screen

    Edits: A good number of grammar edits. A few changed words. Slight rephrasing Approved! Good story, good moral ^_^. d3s flabs.exe
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    TANKI=LIFE Ep.2 (D/L in depth)

    Good stuff once again. Edits: Minor grammar edits. Comma splices and the like. Formatting changes. You don't need to put two spaces after a period. One works fine :). Approved. The strikethrough runs strong with this one :ph34r:. I like your style lol short and sweet with a touch of humour. With slightly better article quality, you could do great things :). And just a word of encouragement. When I was a WO1, I had a D/L of around 0.65. Now it's nearly 1.20 (last I checked at least). With a bit of dedication, anyone can bring it up.^^
  4. Well since this was written mostly by wiki editors, there were predictably very few edits :ph34r:. A couple comma edits here and there (some even made by Marc himself!1!)Approved! Interesting insight into one of the lesser-known helper groups ^_^.
  5. errk, I can't remember the exact spots for the grammar changes. There were two commas that I either added or took out. The typo was "out" and I changed it to "our" (that happens to me all the time too tbh... the t is right next to the r and spellcheck doesn't catch it :wacko:). Again though, I've forgotten the place where that happened. In the future, I'll make lists of every edit I make on your submissions :). If I can remember at least lol.
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    Why TANKI=LIFE

    First off, welcome to the AWS :). Hope to see you around more in the future. I'm gnat. if you have any questions about anything feel free to shoot me a PM. Anyways, back to the topic. Edits: Minor rephrasing in some spots. I tried to make your thoughts flow a tad more smoothly without changing your overall meaning. A couple of grammar edits. You seem to have most grammar rules down though. Good on you (thumbup). Formatting changes (changed font, added headers and stuff. Not very important tbh, just improves the readability. I'd suggest checking out newspaper pieces for formatting ideas in the future) Approved! Great first effort! ^_^ My only bit of advice would be to maybe expand on your points a bit next time. Your current length works great for opinion pieces, but most readers want a bit more info. Keep it up though. oh yeah, and another similarity. I suck at real life and I suck at Tanki :ph34r:.
  7. Edits: A couple minor grammar edits and mistyped words. I could be wrong with this one, but I changed "Your influence may be widespread, but it’s simply not possible that other high-ranking officials were involved." to "Your influence may be widespread, but it’s simply not possible that other high-ranking officials weren't involved." I may be misreading those lines, in which case feel free to change it back to the original, but I feel like given the context, the current phrasing fits best. Approved! Good stuff once again. Sorry for the delay in approving it :unsure:.
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    [Issue 76] Tanki Horoscopes

    ^yes, Ik he has a forum profile. Just keeping the tradition going :ph34r:.
  9. happy to see everyone taking my advice C:
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    FIFA World Cup - Who Will Win?

    'MURIKA! We won't let trivial things like not qualifying keep us from glory. #MiraclesArePossible :ph34r:
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    Matchmaking is coming May 29th

    Le Tanki devs
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    Club "Happy Dragons" [H.D.]

    Zenith! Oh my goodness. It's been ages. So tl;dr on clan happenings, We sucked in the latest EN tourney and were bumped down to newcomers, Kais left because we're terrible and he's a mult, and we're currently working on bringing back the glory days by recruiting people and holding more trainings (tier 2 here we comeeee ^_^). And as for the page, your pics expired and we lost the backups :mellow:. We (I) was hoping you could make new ones for us or re-find the old ones. Hope you can become more active this summer, HD hasn't been the same without you. How's life been going for you?
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    Footballers' Corner

    you can't believe how happy I am that Mourinho didn't win anything this year :lol:. also, Ik everyone hates on Bale cause he normally sucks. But he really comes up in the big games^^
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    Mountainview [Tankiverse Fanfic]

    Edits: code named to code-named (just 'cause if I don't make at least one edit I can't look like a good reporter :ph34r:)Approved! More pls. ty
  15. ^This. The AWS is open to everyone :). Even if your rank is too low to post in the section, you can shoot an AWS helper a PM and ask them to publish it for you. Get writinggg!
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    [Issue 75] Tanki Horoscopes

    Thanks for the entries everyone! Results will be posted in the upcoming issue ^_^. Closed
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    Writers' Corner Discussion

    I dunno if this is the right place to post this, but can we just take a moment to appreciate the old TWG? Of the former members who actually wrote quality stuff that wasn't plagiarised, most have become reporters. That's a pretty remarkable accomplishment considering we were some of the most hated people on the forum at the time lol. Here's a list of the ones who've made it: Pdox (Hexed) marc.jp (Marc) Destrod Yis BTRB (Quantum) Me There may be others too; not sure. Just thought that this was kinda cool :ph34r:.
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    What is your IQ level?

    I got 174, but I'm really salty about the "finger is to hand as leaf is to:" question -.- That's a terrible comparison smh. A twig is just a small branch pretty much, and leaves grow on both twigs and branches. My other complaint is that there's an English vocab question on it... that doesn't have anything to do with IQ. You could be a genius non-native English speaker and get a bad score .__. other than that, it was pretty fun. lol I'm just mad cause I wanted a better score.
  19. All evidence points to the Night-Sisters, just sayin. :ph34r:
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    [Issue 76] Switch The Style

    Hey there, Tankers! Every famous writer through the ages has had his or her specific style. I'm sure we can all recall some of the more well-known ones easily. Shakespearean, Dickensian, Hemmingwayian, Tweezerian, etc. When someone says a story was very Dickens-like, we start predicting how the story goes even before we've read it. Probably there's a poor person whose life is drastically changed by an outside influence of some sort and add in lots and lots of description. Idek. The point is, there are many, many styles of writing that are easily distinguished from one another. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In this contest, you're going to be pairing a well-known style with one of Aesop's fables. There really aren't many restrictions aside from that. You can even change the outcome of the fable if you want as long as you keep the characters the same. The point is, make the fable as much like the style you've chosen as possible. Rules: No plagiarism. This includes the ideas of other tankers. Be original pls Word limit of 1000 words. That should be enough for any short story, js. No extremely obscure styles. This is pretty subjective I guess, but you know what I mean. Don't be like, "I'm writing in the style of Joe Green from across the street". Points will be awarded for how well you copy your chosen style. That's not gonna help you if I've never heard of it. I'd suggest you look online for samples of text in the style you chose. Just to refresh your memory. Prizes: 1st place: 40,000 crystals 2nd place: 30,000 crystals 3rd place: 20,000 crystals Consolation prizes of 10k to deserving participants. Entries will be judged on creativity, plot, and how well the style was imitated. Deadline is the 25th of June. Get writing!
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    [Issue 76] Tanki Horoscopes

    Hey everyone! We received loads of entries for this contest, thanks to all the people who participated. You can't believe how happy I was to see people joining the forum for the first time just to enter :). As promised, here are the winners. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In first place, is . This was a hard decision because some of her points were more personality-related rather than predictions. But in the end, her details won it. Link In second place, winning 20,000 crystals is Darthvadermaximum (who doesn't seem to have a forum account :ph34r:). This might've been my favourite of the bunch actually. Only missed out on first because of Bylord's depth. Link And finally, taking third place with a remarkably detailed entry is @Aigaion. His/Her entertaining predictions had me chuckling. Link Consolation prizes, taking 10k each. @C.O.N.Q.U.E.R.O.R. Cause funny. @Person_Random. This probably would've taken fourth. Tough choice. , whose horoscope was a cut above most others. My only complaint is that my birthday was that week and I got neither a Blue Sphere nor Golden Wrench ;__;. Oh well. for those interested, yes I will be accepting in-game birthday gifts. thank you :ph34r: Congratulations to all the winners. If you didn't win, there are always more contests to take part in! Maybe you'll get it next time. Cya. and to you people who said I wouldn't post the results cause I wasn't an official reporter, d3s.
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    Halloween Party Showdown (Part V)

    Edits: lots and lots of grammar edits. Remember that names are proper nouns and should be capitalised. There weren't many glaring punctuation edits, but there are loads of places where you could make the readability better by including a few more commas. I didn't do it myself cause I'm too lazy :x I kept the unconventional formatting as you requested. I probably missed loads of edits... I'm in a bit of a time crunch right now, so if I made some mistakes feel free to PM me or mention them here. Approved! yayy I was mentioned C:. amusing stuff.
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    [The Medic] One More Time

    No edits. Approved! Mmmmmm I don't trust Ice Hair :ph34r:. edit: waw fancy avatar
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    [Issue 75]

    well no, not really.... It's not exactly a story contest; it's just a writing contest. And the prizes are much more lucrative than normal contests.
  25. welp, in Hippin's defence, this isn't really a normal interview. It's a story formatted as an interview; entirely fictional and meant for the reader's entertainment, so yeah.
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