You asking me? If you are... Soon... Please wait for assistance. Editing story ideas and submitting. Update: I have a new story idea, but I might not publish due to scholastics entry.

It stinks being WO2 and having M1 10/10, yet it's fun to torture those with weak equipment. drugging hasnt become a way of life yet, but playing against lieut ranks there are more druggers in your battles. Well im average so I don't know.

When can I be accepted as applicant (beside ranking up) wut else do i need to do?

where is war site

Dang you are a good writer. Wish I was that good...

Verb tenses. And maybe change the dialogue. Too ping-pong.

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Congrats @thethiefofvictory on the rank up! I don't know why I'm saying this. Oh no so many entries. Time to believe in the power of writing a story without doubting myself. And @Royalworld, your story is great. There are some grammar errors here and there, but there is time. But then I thought Gerald was against guns...

I want cross back!

Several minor issues here and there. Better than most of my stories. Haha. Maybe change the dialogue, kinda ping-pong. Cliffhanger not bad, could be used for sequel. P.S. I thought Gerald no uses a gun.

I'm kind of not sure if this is a chapter or if this is the whole story. Otherwise, great piece!

You do realize that some people don't have the money or time. (me...)

Lol @tweezers your style is awesome! "just a wee bit biased" makes me think very biased but then i might be biased...

I hate being assigned!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wanted EN!!!!!!!

Very intriguing....

yeah if you think of it that way. But the others just suck too much to do anything.

Lol my bad. I was kinda rushed on time earlier. Trying to do school survey and reply @ same time.

True. I'm writing stories that teach lessons while not being depressingly tragic. At least no death and dying yet... Das kinda racist no offense. But anyways, that's what I tell my parents about. My writing class has hordes of these people. True. But what I was talking about was that my class is full of depressing people who write stories about people dying. And they always win the contests we have in class. Stories are pretty nice though. 60% of the AWS is stories. I might publish some scholastic entries from next year after I lose. True again. I need more creativity. :D :D

Writing class.

My parents thought creative writing was trash cause most stories my writing teacher likes have people die in them.

That was me. Go to amateur writing. Click post new topic. Wait few days for reporters. Yay! You have been a published author!

Noope no is Flexoo. But u can imagine him as flexoo

Lol this was part for venting. I guess reporters are... Sure, good explanations. Oh no am I making AWS stupid? :o Yah, what I said earlier. No, they are empty characters. I hate to disappoint you, but this series comes to an end soon. Gotta gear up for YWA and not publish my Scholastic Entries. And wow, I actually wrote a pretty good story.

ok conq ...he still enters (and wins)

Nice. It was a vocab word.