K i'm gonna interview Nives if possible. Or do a profile...

Yeah, pleased to see him to kill him ofc. If they are pleased to see a traitor, they are probably aiming to harm. it is implicit.

Wow my firebird is now weak...

You really think I can face grand? Idk about that. P.P.S. I should use the multiquote button more.

So I might win? Nice to know. Sacrifice was really good tho... It's a pretty competitive piece at my level though it'd be dq'd bc no violence rule @ my writing class. P.S. I did it again. Sorry.

The boss came to ask Oswald where Gerald was and found him there. And I never really said the boss was the leader of the conspiracy. Alexis attacked first. Some parts are meant to be implied, so you did a good job there. Yeah sorry. I should stop doing that.

But it helped improve my writing skillz more than I ever learned in 4 years of writing class. (make that grammar/vocab class) P.S. if you aren't a pro @ grammar, join grammarly here.

Lol you really think I deserve third? Actually I got that last time too so yeah. It's fine.

I know someone who used to be called chicken... and someone who is called chicken... and a potato person... if you read later. What if they got together in an article???

So I have a chance?? YES! You do think I will get close to the win, right? :D :P ;)

Which would mean the prices of those items will go up to keep up with demand. So stock up on drugs now! I almost have a M2 firebird. Would that help? Actually, no. I have no skills.

Just started today...

Isn't this like crazy weekend?

Lol I knew this couple who called each other chicken and potato...

Idk what you want to buy, so pls tell me. Nvm you're probably rich so buy it. Go ahead. How you get magnum stuck in container?

There's a few days. It only takes 5 minutes to change "I" to Gerald and the verb tenses. Use grammarly after changing the I and copy paste.

Lol

Lol Trying to distract me huh? U can change your POV and you might have a better chance...

Sry C.O.N.Q.U.E.R.O.R. can't join MoF till I get rich... Which would be winning an impossible contest. (cause Grand is there)

Lol me too didn't you say you were gonna dethrone grand?

I love being high ranks!

K let me take a look at it. (must tell you that my comments are sugarcoated - I'm too much of a nice person) First comments: very descriptive, good intro to chapter. So this isn't your fault, but I think that when Grand wrote Ch.4, the personality of Oswald twisted from unyielding back to the old Oswald who gave Gerald the job. The ending is great though. Never could write endings to save my life.

Watch when it happens again next issue...

I'm still trash at this

Lol me too Chances of getting a prize just took a nosedive cause of my lack of self-esteem and Grand's amazing talents. -_- Guess I'll never be a good writer... My teacher never thought I was good anyways... :ph34r: