There's a few days. It only takes 5 minutes to change "I" to Gerald and the verb tenses. Use grammarly after changing the I and copy paste.

Lol

Lol Trying to distract me huh? U can change your POV and you might have a better chance...

Sry C.O.N.Q.U.E.R.O.R. can't join MoF till I get rich... Which would be winning an impossible contest. (cause Grand is there)

Lol me too didn't you say you were gonna dethrone grand?

I love being high ranks!

K let me take a look at it. (must tell you that my comments are sugarcoated - I'm too much of a nice person) First comments: very descriptive, good intro to chapter. So this isn't your fault, but I think that when Grand wrote Ch.4, the personality of Oswald twisted from unyielding back to the old Oswald who gave Gerald the job. The ending is great though. Never could write endings to save my life.

Watch when it happens again next issue...

I'm still trash at this

Lol me too Chances of getting a prize just took a nosedive cause of my lack of self-esteem and Grand's amazing talents. -_- Guess I'll never be a good writer... My teacher never thought I was good anyways... :ph34r:

I was thinking Cross but too small of a map. Will turn into battle zone within seconds.

P.S. I also changed the parts where you said it was like a house to make the building open for interpretation.

K Makes more sense.

I has 26 after the GAME and weekly missions

Ok after reading some more, I think there is a problem with the 'I' in the story. you can't really do that unless carter was telling the story the whole time. I might be wrong...

When are my articles gonna be published? unless they sucked :ph34r: :ph34r:

I kinda get it so it's ok. I have great reasoning skills...not really.

I think he meant by shooting own teammates.

And highways is pretty much gone after this. Maybe replace it with a better map.

It's nice when you're winning, which is never for my alt and 10% for me.

Just came back from writing class. So demoralized... -_- -_- :( -_- -_-

Can't relate. Still in my M1 ranks...

I have no gifts so I can't relate.

Nice but it'll take forever for me.

Yassss Goodbye Highways! (and two other maps yet to be named)