Does Grammarly get credit for fixing comma errors?

Do you mean its (without apostrophe)? I think it would make more sense as the word 'it's' literally translates to it is...

criiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii i no got none of the cupcakes with the money i paids for oh well....

And when will that be?

Er.... you mean something like dy/dx= something?

I might want to join...

cedric only drops in with bad news...

Nice my good sir... now ples answer my SOS call.

Wait... batteries without a drone!!! Tanki! Please don't make me use my crystals before a sale! Please... I beg you.

... the signature gave it away.

Good Lucky

Tanki wouldn't exist since my parents don't like games.

Dude that Wo2 sucks... he has m2 Freeze and no K/D above 2.0. What a loser.

I agree with Kaisdf, however, I'd like to suggest changing the "I later did this" to "Later, I did this", which will also vary up the sentence starts. For the "I decided", I'm thinking make the character have to choose between two things, and then add in "I decided" for a bit of an effect and transition. Overall, though, you've improved a lot in your work from the first one. Can't wait for part 3!

Could've made more of an effort on dialogue, very ping-pongy (if that even is a word). In other words, you could have expanded the description around the dialogue so I could have a clearer picture, even if it does allude to something else.

Surprised by the ending! Wow... I liked it. I'll comment more later. *2 hours Later* Grammar Hitler Wakes Up. Excellent read, good plot. However, there are a lot of "i did this, I did that..." sentences. Try to vary your sentence starts so that it seems more impressive and also contributes to the flow. I'd suggest keeping the "I" starts to about 1 per paragraph. I've demonstrated a few methods in my example paragraph, including changing the sentence style (simple/compound to complex) and adding an adjective. I hope you'll understand what that meant. In the future, I'd like to see another story series, or maybe a single story. I don't know for sure what topic or theme, though. You'll have to come up with those.

Maybe you could say "trivia" instead of interesting facts, and also color it so I can find it a little easier.

Wait how about score highest on the losing team or get between top 3 and top 5 for winning team lol

Then you get a drone and realize how important batteries are. I've already learned. I got mine for free. Er...

hmmmm sounds familiar.....

Did you fall asleep on the keyboard at some point?

Criiii I got a bad grade on my formula test...

*wants to write what I want* News Admins: *promptly censors it* sigh.... writes a 'proper' guide. Working on it...

Lolz, when Tanki mods love u... they give u an advert... but me.... cri.. eh well....

This is just some annoying beef I had... Flexoo never gives me an ingame advert while other people keep getting one. I think I deserve at least an explanation. It makes me annoyed to see that my work is brushed aside as an afterthought. I might as well just write my next work in gibberish.