Sorry, I suffer from Noobomia, so I cannot stop being a noob.

As long as you keep neutral - oh wait, that's impossible.

Hey, it's been a whole year since MM (matchmaking) was released. I can't help but say that I've lost a ton of Tanki friends and grown increasingly frustrated with the game. Your thoughts?

Happy Birthday Tanki!!!

Hmm I never noticed this topic got opened again? By the way, do you like chocolate?

Long time no see mod. Heheeee ikr all movie plots so predictable... I just watched a movie in English and predicted the ending. Anyways nice job, hopefully you'll be writing more!

lovely

Don't forget Shaft... kinda like Railgun but more precise aim.

I use it for my english essays because my teacher tells me to and occasionally on my 150 page novel so I can spam some word count, but otherwise, not really.

I'd have to agree too, I was thinking it was a nature poam until I read the title (during my first impression)

Does Grammarly get credit for fixing comma errors?

Do you mean its (without apostrophe)? I think it would make more sense as the word 'it's' literally translates to it is...

criiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii i no got none of the cupcakes with the money i paids for oh well....

And when will that be?

Er.... you mean something like dy/dx= something?

I might want to join...

cedric only drops in with bad news...

Nice my good sir... now ples answer my SOS call.

Wait... batteries without a drone!!! Tanki! Please don't make me use my crystals before a sale! Please... I beg you.

... the signature gave it away.

Good Lucky

Tanki wouldn't exist since my parents don't like games.

Dude that Wo2 sucks... he has m2 Freeze and no K/D above 2.0. What a loser.

I agree with Kaisdf, however, I'd like to suggest changing the "I later did this" to "Later, I did this", which will also vary up the sentence starts. For the "I decided", I'm thinking make the character have to choose between two things, and then add in "I decided" for a bit of an effect and transition. Overall, though, you've improved a lot in your work from the first one. Can't wait for part 3!

Could've made more of an effort on dialogue, very ping-pongy (if that even is a word). In other words, you could have expanded the description around the dialogue so I could have a clearer picture, even if it does allude to something else.